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This was an old PoC story I was making. This was made during some of the worse times and wars in Poc. I might finish it later

 

 

The Attack

 

(It was a dark night and NoC was in their city walls just doing their thing. Their leader Tsduk gave an announcement)

 

Tsduk: Our spies have found BBE’s base tonight we will strike them and tear them apart!

 

Crowd: Yah! Destroy BBE!

 

Tsduk: We will siege their walls and destroy and burn their city!

 

Everblade: But Tsduk how many soldiers do they have?

 

Tsduk: They change their guards every 2 hours at night they double the guards which is 10 at night and 5 at day.

 

Red: That's not so hard just snipe em from the trees

 

Tsduk: They have a tree farm we can burn that as a distraction and then siege their base

 

(It becomes very dark and finally the Clan is ready to attack)

 

Tsduk: RedTang and Everblade go start the fire and then we can attack

 

(Red and Everblade start the fire in the tree farm)

 

Guard 1: THE FOREST IS ON FIRE

 

(Suddenly an arrow hits the guard)

 

Tsduk: ATTACK!

 

(NoC raids the city)

(Austin leaps at Tsduk)

 

Austin: Too bad Tsduk you have to die!

 

(Lilith leaps at Austin knocking him away)

 

Lilth: You sure?

 

(Austin shoves Lilith away)

 

(Scene changes)

 

Everblade: Time to blow this place up!

 

Red: Not yet we're still fighting. Where are our Tunnelers?

 

Everblade: I don't think they made it maybe their fighting outside

 

(2 tunnelers appear)

Everblade: Finally Sky and Flame are here

 

Red: Sky if you wanna stay in this Clan help us out k

 

Sky: Sorry got carried away.

 

(The fight continues)
 

(Tsduk is fighting 3 BBE guards)

 

Sushi: Wavy give me so backup!

 

Wavy: Hold on!

(Wavy kills a soldier)

 

Austin: BBE keep fighting!

 

(Red throws a poison potion at Austin)

 

Red: Long time no see hmm? Austin.

 

(The fight continues and soldiers are fighting everywhere from both sides)

 

(Austin tries to attack Red but Red disappears)

 

(Suddenly and explosion happens beneath him and the city starts blowing up)

 

(Red, Ever, Sky, Flame jump out)

 

(BBE is struggling to keep fighting and some BBE are retreating)

 

Tsduk: Take the loot and destroy this place!

 

Austin: BBE will never be destroyed not even by noobs!

 

(Austin runs off)

 

The Next Step

 

Austin(Thinking): *what to do? What to do?*

Madison: Austin the remaining members of BBE need your opinion on what to do next

 

Austin: I need to think on what to do next please can you leave

 

Madison: Yes sir

 

Kirsten: Any luck?

 

Madison: Nothing so far

 

(Austin appears)

Austin: I know who can help us.

 

Madison: Who?

 

Austin: Never mind that but first we should return the favor to NoC. Madison tell the others to head to the nearest BBE village I need to take care of some business.

 

(Austin walks through a dark jungle and sees a patrol)

 

Austin: A GoD patrol seems like their heading somewhere i should ask them where Clayton is

 

Russian GoD Soldier(In Russian): Whos this idiot on our territory

 

Soldier of GoD(In Russian): This is Austin of BBE

 

Soldier of GoD: What are you doing here Austin

 

Austin: I would like to see Bloodblade

 

Soldier of GoD: Stay here i'll go tell him     

 

(The soldier returns with Clayton or Bloodblade behind him)

 

Clayton: What do you want Austin?

 

The New Alliance

 

Clayton: You know I can't do that

 

Austin: Why not?

 

Clayton: I cant betray Redtang he would be angry if I did

 

Austin: Forget Redtang he's a useless piece of **** anyway NoC shouldn't have him

 

Clayton: He did start the rebellion against you

 

Austin: Forget what I said this is business talk here Clayton. We need to raid NoC so we can destroy GHE and their allies.

 

Clayton: I do want to destroy GHE but I don't wanna betray NoC

 

Austin: Darkest Hour is dying anyway they won't be much help. So Clayton are you in or not?

 

Clayton(Not knowing what to say then his voice changes): So Austin what's your plan?

 

Austin: (Smiles)

 

Raid on NoC

 

Red: Good chickens thanks for the eggs

 

Tsduk: How are the animals?

 

Red: Doing good just finished checking the Zoo animals i'll go check the sheep farm

 

Tsduk: Good

 

Everblade: Tsduk that raid on BBE was awesome!

 

Tsduk: I'm glad your happy Everblade thank goodness every soldier that died on our side respawned

 

Everblade: I know

 

NpC Novice: Tsduk a patrol we sent hasn’t come back

 

Tsduk: I'll go check it out

 

(Tsduk walks through the forest.)

 

Austin: I'm sure there around here somewhere

 

Clayton: Ya sure cause I don't see a base anywhere

 

Tsduk(thoughts): I better warn the Clan

 

(Tsduk runs to the Clan Base)

Tsduk: BBE and GoD are coming prepare defences!

 

NoC Guard: Invaders!!!

 

(BBE and GoD flood into the base)

 

Tsduk: Fight back!

 

(NoC defends the base from the invaders)

 

(Iron golems fight the invaders)

 

RedTang(In his house): Were not gonna win. I better get to my bunker.

 

(RedTang runs out of his house)

 

RedTang(Thoughts): Maybe it might work but would Wolf help me? I got no choice.

 

(A BBE soldier named Genesis leaps at him)

 

RedTang: Now i see why Austin recruited you again!

 

Genesis: BoD was a great Clan but BBE is better!

 

RedTang(Pulls out his sword): Lets see how good BBE is

 

(Tsduk is fighting Austin)

 

Tsduk: You’ll never win Austin

 

Austin: You thought I was alone

 

Tsduk(He remembers GoD is with BBE): Oh ****

 

Austin: Your girls are mine now

Tsduk: You mean my w-

 

(Clayton and GoD charge in)

 

Clayton: Attack!

 

(RedTang attacks Clayton)
 

RedTang: I always knew you were weak!

 

Clayton(With a sword): Hmph

 

(Clayton tries to attack RedTang but Red used potions to strengthen him)

 

(RedTang throws harm potions then attacks Austin)

 

Austin: The little hero trying to stop me

 

RedTang: Wow! Thanks for the compliment. DIAMOND WARRIORS ENGAGE!

 

(A group of rogues come in to assist RedTang)

 

RedTang: Wolf Chief thanks for coming

 

Wolf: No problem Riverstar it's been awhile

 

RedTang: Yup

 

Wolf: Diamond Warriors FIGHT!

The New Allied Forces

Kian: The Russians are planning something I know it

 

Pope: The Russians are idiots anyway we can destroy them anytime

 

Scarlet: Don't get your hopes up Pope

 

Kian: Dark what are you doing here?

 

Dark Killer: Kian we have a visitor

 

Kian: Who is it?

 

Dark Killer: Tsduk, Lilth, Everblade, and RedTang

 

Tsduk: Kian we need your help

 

Kian: Dark you can go now. Pope and Scarlet i want you here. Now Tsduk what makes you think ill help.

 

Tsduk: GoD and BBE have formed an alliance

 

RedTang: Thankfully we didn't get any severe casualties thanks to the Diamond Warriors we were able to drive them out

 

Kian: So why did you come to me then when you already got an ally?

 

Tsduk: It's not enough

 

Lilith: Austin and Clayton may be idiots but it seems like they’ve gotten more motivated now

 

Scarlet: You want us to fight BBE and GoD?

Tsduk: Well alongside us

 

Kian: Let me think about it

 

Tsduk: Thank you.

 

(The visitors leave)

 

(Suddenly Kian yells at them)

 

Kian: Stop!!!

 

Tsduk: What is it?

 

Kian: We will help you if you help us

 

Everblade: And the job is?

 

Kian: To destroy the Russians.

 

The First Battle: Part 1/2

 

RedTang: Tuo do you accept we still need you bro

 

Tuo: Eliezer you already know what happened last time.

 

RedTang: Were attacking the Russians tonight you in or not

 

Tuo: Do I have to say yes?

 

RedTang: C'mon we can fight like the old days

 

Tuo: Fine

 

(RedTang teleports back to Tsduk)

 

Tsduk: Is he in?

 

RedTang: Yup

 

Tsduk: And Estefania’s gang?

 

RedTang: I don't know yet but i told her where the fight will take place

 

Tsduk: Mexicans are useless

 

RedTang: Eh we could use the extra human-shields

 

(GHE, Diamond Warriors, NoC are in main spawn)

 

RedTang: I don't see any Russians

 

Everblade: Ya sure

Wavy: Less talk were here to scout the area

 

Cherry: Supposedly Kian and the Russians were supposed to meet up here

 

Sushi: In main spawn?

 

Tsduk: Megans here

 

RedTang: WHAT!

 

Banshee: Whos Megan

 

RedTang: A sub-leader of GoD

 

BlueTang: Some Russians are here

 

Everblade: Austins here

 

Tsduk: Their surrounding the spawn

 

RedTang: We cant let them

 

Tuo: Wheres Kian?

 

Tsduk: Off to meet the Russian leader

 

Tuo: So you wanna cut off the meeting and end up in a massive battle

 

Kian: Shut up you idiots i'm right here

 

Tsduk: Wait so whos gonna meet up with the Russians

 

Kian: Scarlet and Pope

 

Tuo: Long time no see Kian

 

Kian: Things have happened but i’d rather destroy the Russians than deal with you

 

Lilith: I see the meeting happening

 

Kian: Have my soldiers surrounded the meeting

 

Lilith: Yes but…

 

(A russian attacks Scarlet)

 

Lilith: A russian has attacked Scarlet!

 

Kian: Then let the battle begin!

 

The First Battle Part 2/2

 

(Austin watches GHE attack the Russian meeting)

 

Austin: BBE and GoD Attack!

 

Popo(In Slovakian): You heard him! Attack!

 

Clayton: Engage!

 

(Austin leaps at Pope)

 

Austin: Time to take revenge!

 

Pope: You think killing me will do anything i'll respawn either way

 

(Sushi attacks Austin)

 

Sushi: I'll make you regret creating BoD!

 

Austin: Bring it idiot!

 

(RedTang is fighting Kirsten and Goldstar)

 

RedTang: Too slow this is exactly why i never trained you to fight!

 

Kirsten: Shut up!

 

Goldstar: Kirsten give me some backup

 

Everblade: RedTang go help Banshee I got this

 

RedTang: You sure?

 

Everblade: Just go!

 

(The fight continues and the camera moves around the battle zone)

 

(Here are some of the battles shown on camera)

 

*Kian and Scarlet vs Clayton and Megan

Tsduk vs GoD’s Russian Leader(Idk the name so you guys can fix it)

RedTang, BlueTang and Banshee vs Popo and Gogo and Kenneth

Austin vs Sushi

Pope and Dark Killer vs Madison and Austins Slave

Karan vs Zerow

Tuo vs Lemon

Wolf and Alexandra vs Jack Reacher

Venom vs Paris

Faded and Lucious vs Zero

Ghostblade vs Batu

Everblade vs Kirsten and Goldstar*

 

{Clans in battle}

*NoC

GHE

BBE

Osso

Divina

GoD

The Praetorian Guard

Any other Russians

Diamond Warriors

Darkest Hour

Estefania’s Gang

Sapphire Hand/Organization

Paris’s Rebels

Anti-GHE players

GHE Allies

Every Player on Forums or Known on PoC in this First Battle*

 

(The battle is everywhere even noobs and rogues are fighting)

 

(RedTang kills Popo and Gogo flees)

 

RedTang(With a bow): I'm not gonna miss

 

(He shoots and hits Gogo and Gogo dies)

 

Banshee: They will respawn

 

RedTang: But they’ll be weaker

 

Modz: I'm back suckers!

 

Austin: Aww sh**

 

(Sushi kills Austin)
 

Sushi: HAH WHOS THE NOOB NOW DUMB***

 

(Modz leaps at Sushi)

 

Sushi: were on the same side here

 

Modz: Uh

 

Austin: Attack!

 

(More BBE soldiers attack)

 

Kian: GHE never surrenders!

 

Estefania: ya estoy aqui donde estas Eliezer?

 

RedTang(In spanish): Ya estas aqui ayuda nos necesitamos tu ayuda

 

Juan: Pelea!

 

(The mexicans join in the fight)

 

(Austin is fighting with Tsduk)

 

Austin: Your weak Tsduk! (He spits out)

 

Tsduk: NoC will never die!

 

Austin: Are you sure you can trust your own members!
 

Tsduk: Shut your mouth you rodent

 

Austin: Thanks for your mine though

 

Tsduk: Your joking you liar!

 

Austin: you sure you cant even trust your own members?

 

The First Battle Part 2/2

 

(the battle wages in every direction)

 

Sky: Is the TNT ready to blow up?

 

Flame: Not yet!

 

RedTang: woah woah woah! Wait we need to fill in the corner areas where the battles occurring

 

Flame: don't we need to make some tunnels?

 

RedTang: Sky give me some lava.

 

Flame: Let me fill in the last gaps that way the explosion goes everywhere

 

(Flame places the last TNT)

 

Flame: i'm done!

 

Red: Okay! Everyone get out of this place it's gonna blow!

 

Flame: Azura you heard him let's get out!

 

Sky: Azura lets go!

 

Azura: Sorry got distracted

 

Everblade: MOVE IT!

 

Red: I've placed the lava! Run!

 

Azura: Oh no my sword!

 

Red: I got it! RUN!

 

(Scene changes)

 

Clayton: BBE keep pushing!

 

Kian: GHE FIGHT BACK!

 

Tsduk: NoC give me backup!

 

Austin: Keep pushing! Surround them!

 

(BBE and its allies create a tight circle around the GHE and NoC forces.)

 

Kian: Keep defending

Tsduk(Thinking): We're gonna lose!

 

*TNT blows up and knocks out half of BBE’s allies*

 

(RedTang, Everblade, Azura, Flame, Sky, and Estefania jump out)

 

RedTang: Bleach, Lion and your brother attack!

 

(3 soldiers jump out of the hole)

 

Lion: Been a long time!

 

Bleach: Sorry bout last time

 

Lions Brother: Less talk time to fight!

 

RedTang(Pulls out a sword): Lets do this! Kirsten your mine you traitor!

 

*RedTang and his allies attack the stunned BBE forces.*

 

(RedTang fights against Kirsten who is stunned)

 

RedTang: It's over Kirsten!

 

Kirsten: I tried to say sorry!

 

Red: it's over!

 

*Red swings his sword and hits Kirsten several times*

 

Kirsten: I can't fight you!

 

Red: Then I will destroy you!

(Austin stuns RedTang and yells)

 

Austin: Retreat!!!!

 

The Exile

 

(PoC had been scarred since the battle much territory had been lost and bases found)

 

Red: Wolf I don't know if I should leave

 

Chief Wolf: It's your choice I know your still scarred but-

 

Red: Is that Austin?

 

Chief: Oh my that is him it's been 3 days since the battle why is he here

 

(Austin is walking with someone behind him)

 

Red: Maybe he wants to see Tsduk

 

Chief Wolf: Probably well if you change your mind you know where to find me

 

Red: Thanks though

 

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Austin(As a spy): Blue you sure this is the place

 

Blue: Yup welcome to NoC

 

Austin: Thanks

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Tsduk: YOUR A TRAITOR TO NOC!

 

RedTang: I'm innocent I told you I saw Austin and someone else with him

 

Tsduk: your lying! Now he knows where our mineshaft is and now it's on the forums!

 

Red: I'm sorry but it's not me!

 

Tsduk: I'm done giving you chances! Goodbye it's been fun playing with you!

 

*Everblade and some other NoC soldiers are escorting him away*

 

RedTang(Thoughts): I have to prove my innocence just patrolled the area after Austin said Banshee betrayed us. Damn he's smart. I wonder who is helping him. I have 2 choices: Either force Austin to tell me the truth or join one of the Clans like GHE, Darkest Hour, or Diamond Warriors.

 

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Austin: Now Eliezer is gone from NoC. 1 more victory at last!

 

Clayton: So what's next?

 

Austin: Keep gaining power until the next battle and also either way Eliezer will never be able to rejoin NoC.

 

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Austin: Yes BlueTang did it

RedTang: I knew it was you!

 

Tsduk: So it was all a lie?

 

Austin: I told you it wasnt Eliezer isn't that enough

 

Everblade: How could you!?

 

Austin: i got revenge on NoC and anyways what use is Eliezer anyway

 

RedTang: Leave now Austin!

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Tsduk: You betrayed me so leave this place and never come back!

 

Eliezer/RedTang: I did everything you asked me to do. I am still trying to get your diamond blocks.

 

Tsduk: i don't wanna hear or see you again in PoC! Disappear and never come back! Ever!

 

Red: But… FINE BE UNAPPRECIATED HOW MUCH STUFF I'VE DONE FOR YOU AND THIS IS WHAT I GET! All these betrayals have never been me! One day you’ll see.

 

*Red leaves forever and disappears*

 

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The Rise of GHE

 

Kian: GHE is becoming so powerful we have destroyed so many Clans especially OSSO

Scarlet: OSSO was weak and knew they couldn't win either way-

 

Pope: One enemy down. Now we're unstoppable

 

*Tsduk is brought to Kian and the others*

 

Tsduk: Ive gotten rid of that useless RedTang and now he will never exist ever again.

 

Kian: And what else do you want?

 

Tsduk: We need to destroy BBE and I have the perfect idea.

 

The Upcoming Battle

 

Austin: Clayton you gotta keep fighting!

 

Clayton: I can't my Clan is too weak to go on i've run out of resources and I cant fight anymore i'm sorry.

 

Austin: TRAITOR!

 

Clayton: I'm sorry Austin

 

(Clayton walks out and his clan follows)

 

Austin: We need to win this war!

 

Kirsten: We have lost to many soldiers and gotten weak we need a new plan

 

Austin: RedTang is kicked out of NoC but I don't think it will hold him off for long.

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Tuo: Fine you can stay with me but you better stay hidden

 

RedTang: Thanks bro I knew I could count on you

 

Tuo: So how did you exactly get kicked out

 

Red: Austin

 

Tuo: They better watch out i'll be back!

 

Tuo: And also we should change your name and i'll change mine

 

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The Final Battle

 

Raydermus: Didn't I make myself clear i'm not going back!

 

Flameheart: We need you!

 

Tuo: It's your choice Raydermus I told him you may not accept

 

Raydermus: I'm sorry I can't accept.

 

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Kian: Keep going we need to find them!

 

Scarlet: The Final Battle is approaching Clayton will be destroyed

 

Tsduk: Finish this!

Everblade:

 

RedTangs Rock3
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this is old and i believe this was a script for the actual story

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*Kian: "Oh Boi"

 

 

*hangs himself*

-Modz-
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Just complete the damn story you told everyone you were making atleast then new people will have an idea of what actually happened int our era

RedTangs Rock3
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damn i kind forgot lemme go back

RedTangs Rock3
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but its pretty accurate

RedTangs Rock3
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can someone suggest how the Final Battle should go

-Modz-
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RedTangs Rock3,how it actually wrnt with ghe winning once again

۰Kian۰
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.-Modz-.,Daveon just comes down from the sky farting rainbows and kills us all

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BlueTangs Rock3
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E is Green

Elektrika
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Austin surrenders and is sentenced to death in a pit of lava and bedrock XD

Elektrika
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Srry austin i had no other ideas

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I don't mean to be rude, but your depictions of the people in this story don't remotely sound like the actual people, you made Blue seem like a moron... I am not happy angry

Enderr
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BansheePlant, Also did NoC and Ghe work together before?

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EnderDaBestNingen, Yup, I can confirm this as I was a member of NoC for a while until it disbanded 

J-Dog
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This is so unaccurate it actually makes my balls hurt. Anyone want the true story feel free to message me, eliezer you kinda pissed me off here

Elektrika
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J-Dog,i just said u were sentenced to death like that to be funny XD

RedTangs Rock3
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J-Dog, uh huh.  Some stuff was true tho

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?

Enderr
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Every Player on Forums or Known on PoC in this First Battle

Me: Wat

RedTangs Rock3
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and its not supposed to be accurate it just gives a picture on what happened then

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RedTangs Rock3, In the game, no one would talk too much in a war